Because people hide behind their false self and allow shame to eat at them, they aren’t allowed to truly express themselves.
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Because people hide behind their false self and allow shame to eat at them, they aren’t allowed to truly express themselves.
I think that this paper is about shame and false identites
What its about: People cover because they feel they aren’t allowed to express their true selves and therefore they experience shame
Improve it: propose a solution about how we can allow people to not cover and to show their true selves
I think that this paper is about shame and false identities. One way to improve this thesis is to explain what a false self is and how to fix it
I think the paper is about people hiding behind their false self and shame doesn’t allow people to be their true self. I wouldn’t start with “because” maybe start with “people”. There are a couple ideas that need to be expanded upon and that is it.
Give me some action plans to rectify this problem you’ve identified
Frame it up in a solution!
“Since people aren;t allowed to be their true selves, we must______________” FILL IN THE BLANK