Learning Outcome 2

When putting evidence into my essays, I often would go back and use important highlighted parts from my reading. I often did this in papers one and two, as paper three used quotes that weren’t in a paper. When it came to quotes that were online that I got, I simply would read through, and pick which I thought most would support the idea I was trying to get across. When highlighting in papers I would often highlight key words from sentence that I thought were important, or overall whole sentence that I thought would be important. When it came to putting evidence in my papers I also went through and reread the quotes to see if I needed the whole quote or just a certain part of it that really supported my idea that I was trying to explain. In paper two I thought it was harder to find evidence because there was a great variety that supported what I was trying to say, and I really had to think which one was going to be the best fit. Looking at the final of paper two, I used my thesis statement to make sure the quotes I did choose truly connected to the ideas I was trying to state. Also when it came to using evidence I learned how to properly introduce a quote and explain what the quote means. This was a very useful tool to learn because before I would barely explain and introduce my quotes in a poor way. From reading “They Say I Say”, I now have tools that I learned how to properly use evidence in a paper. In my final paper two, if you go to the paragraph two I do a good job explaining the quote and introducing the quote.

This is an example of my annotation or papers that we had to read in class. Once starting the paper and needing evidence I would go back and look at the highlighted information to see if it was useful for me to use in my paper.
This an example of my annotations from “They Say I Say” and from the annotations you can tell that I struggled more with them. I feel that I struggled more with these annotations because it wasn’t very interesting to read and therefore I didn’t have much to comment on. I often just would highlight examples and explanations of why to do something different and how it can make it better.