Post Project 1

Comment: comma splice (local errors) I agree that through my essay, I had quite a few local errors. Before submitting my paper I forgot to proofread for grammar and spelling mistakes. I only read through the essay before submitting to make sure I had all the points hit from the prompt. Next time I need … [Read more…]

Lama Anno

The Dalai Lama essay focuses on genetic engineering. In the beginning of the essay, it starts applying it only to changing the genetics of produces items and wheat and grain. When in talking about changing the genetics it talks about the benefits which include being immune to pests and having a longer shelf life, along … [Read more…]

Dalai Lama Response

Dalai Lama is surely right with the fact that all human beings have value no matter what disease or disability they may have, and because of having a cousin with down syndrome I can confirm this. People believe that being born with a disease of disability is the end of the world. This is a … [Read more…]

TRIAC HW

Ken Yoshino in his essay about covering, focus on how people hide from who they really are. Yoshino talks about how people hide behind there false self to protect their true self. He discuss how wrong it is and how we need to be in a world where people can’t be afraid of what they … [Read more…]

HW-4

From listening and reading a ted talk “How telling our silenced stories can change the world” by Anne Hallward, Anne depends the definition of shame and how it truly affects people instead of being some small little word people use it for. By telling people you should be ashamed of yourself over something small like … [Read more…]

Yoshino TRIAC Paragraph

Freedom as a concept is more important than the individual freedoms of a specific group of people. Freedom is defined as not being restricted or oppressed. Yoshino believes that freedom is more important than individual freedom of a specific group due to the fact that everyone should be treated equally. In the article Yoshino examines, … [Read more…]

Yoshino Claims

Yoshino claims that your social life is like a puzzle. People cover to hide there true self, and buy doing this it complicates their social life. By doing this people act as a missing puzzle to a puzzle and have to figure out how to express them and how they are going to fit in.